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Just sitting... by SurfingCA Just sitting... by SurfingCA
I just felt like posting this here because I'm actually a little proud of how this came out (which is extremely rare for me)

Critique please! (Maybe if I get good at this someday I can premium!)
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SonicAmp Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love them eyes! The style is very cute!
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SurfingCA Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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SonicAmp Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!!!
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laberoon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Firstly, I like the original style, it works. That said, I shall now attempt to point out any things I feel could be improved...
1. The tail is too rigid, it looks like she is holding it out, and it's not sitting naturally
2. The rear leg, the top bit sticks out just a bit too much, making it look a bit odd

Otherwise, it's good. I personally love the eyes
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SurfingCA Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! And I see what you mean about the leg. I'll fix it when I can.
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laberoon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Welcome :D
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elGuy0 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
The eyes stare into my soul and awaken monstrosities never before uncovered by my inner psyche.

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Midknight-p5 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oo, I know it's been said already but I love the eyes. Kinda reminds me of how I did the seapony eyes that one time, [link]

Anyway, I pretty much agree with everything Steam said, particularly the rear leg and the tail. Just make the tail a bit limper so it lays on the ground and round the corners of the leg some. I'm also looking at the shading and the mane is shaded so the light is above her, but the tail so that it's below her. Other than that this is pretty damn good overall, I really like how you skewed the smile. Gives it a lot more personality.
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SurfingCA Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm gonna be honest, I completely forgot the tail when I uploaded this at 2 am, and then rushed it this morning to avoid embarrassment.
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Midknight-p5 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh man, that shit happens to me all the time. So many wingless alicorns...
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